Today we established what "analyzing" actually is: explaining how evidence proves the point we are making...evidence doesn't speak for itself.
We looked at the P.E.A.s of TDA
P-Point
E-Evidence
A-Analysis.
Every TDA paragraph should have P.E.A.s
We pulled the setting evidence from "The Snow Cave" and "The Sea Wolf" and explained/analyzed how each proved the POINT that was made for this TDA.
The job of the students this week is to actually write "The Snow Cave" and "The Sea Wolf" TDA. I will remind students again that the TDA is not a measure of how well we write, but how well we respond to a text we have read.
Please let me know if you have any questions.
I will collect the TDA packet next week. The TDA should be written in that packet on the last front and back page with lines.
Students can review the pages titled "How Should I incorporate a direct quotes as my evidence?" and "make a claim about the evidence" but they are just to assist them with writing their first TDA.
As always, message me with questions.
Saturday, September 29, 2018
Saturday, September 22, 2018
Overview from 9/22 and Assignment due 9/29
Today we reviewed how to establish our task in the TDA prompts before going on to the next step: writing a topic sentence.
Students completed the topic sentence page with me, one of which included the prompt and topic sentence for "The Snow Cave" and "The Sea Wolf".
The topic sentence we came up for regarding "The Snow Cave" and "The Sea Wolf" is as follows:
In "The Snow Cave" and "The Sea Wolf" the settings reveal a dangerous mood.
FOR HOMEWORK:
Students are to read "The Snow Cave" and "The Sea Wolf" for a second time, but this time they are to focus their annotations on setting descriptions that contribute to the mood of danger that we stared in our topic sentence. I expect them to highlight or list the examples they find for each story.
Don't forget your packet next week as we will continue to work in it.
Students completed the topic sentence page with me, one of which included the prompt and topic sentence for "The Snow Cave" and "The Sea Wolf".
The topic sentence we came up for regarding "The Snow Cave" and "The Sea Wolf" is as follows:
In "The Snow Cave" and "The Sea Wolf" the settings reveal a dangerous mood.
FOR HOMEWORK:
Students are to read "The Snow Cave" and "The Sea Wolf" for a second time, but this time they are to focus their annotations on setting descriptions that contribute to the mood of danger that we stared in our topic sentence. I expect them to highlight or list the examples they find for each story.
Don't forget your packet next week as we will continue to work in it.
Saturday, September 15, 2018
Overview from 9/15 and Assignment due 9/22
Today we did our first Text Dependent Analysis (TDA) Workshop. The students were given a packet that they need to bring with them every week until I say otherwise. Forgetting the packet at home will make it hard for them to participate each week, and would cause them to get a zero score on the assignment that is due in the packet that week.
TDA Prompts have 3 sentences and each sentences serves a purpose:
First sentence: Gives an overview of the text the prompt goes with OR skill needed for the essay
Second sentence: Gives the task (what you have to analyze/write about)
Third sentence: Reminds you to always cite evidence to support your response
We also looked at the difference between Literary ELEMENTS vs. Literary DEVICES. Students took notes on the two. Each TDA task asks students to look at the relationship between Literary elements and devices. They should always box the following in each TDA prompt task sentence:
1. Literary element
2. Literary device
3. The verb that connects the literary element and literary device
FOR NEXT WEEK:
Students are to read and annotate "The Snow Cave" and "The Sea Wolf" in their TDA packets. I will check annotations next week before starting our next assignment where we will use those texts.
Monday, September 10, 2018
FALL 2018 Overview
This Fall we will focus on the following:
1) Text-Dependent Analysis (TDA) writing: This mode of writing is introduced to public school students in 4th grade, and students are required to perform this mode of writing on all PSSA exams they take from that grade level and on. Analysis is a tough skill for fourth grade students to grasp, and a common trend shows that students don't perform this mode well until 8th grade...if they get enough practice. I will spend the first month this Fall scaffolding this skill to students as we look at sample prompts, sample essays, and read short stories we will respond to TDA writing prompts for. If students master this style of writing, they will have success in analytical essays they will be expected to write in independent schools.
2) Nonfiction Signposts of Literature: For the remainder of the Fall semester, I will teach students Nonfiction Signposts. These signposts are things to look for in nonfiction/information text, a type of text students need to become as familiar with as possible considering it will be the most common type of text they will be required to interact with across all courses in their education. They will be taught a new signpost each week that we will look for in a different information text to practice. At the end of the semester, we will look at one text where they can use all signposts for as a summative assessment for the semester.
Please feel free to contact me with questions at:
fameacademy.literacy@famefund.org
1) Text-Dependent Analysis (TDA) writing: This mode of writing is introduced to public school students in 4th grade, and students are required to perform this mode of writing on all PSSA exams they take from that grade level and on. Analysis is a tough skill for fourth grade students to grasp, and a common trend shows that students don't perform this mode well until 8th grade...if they get enough practice. I will spend the first month this Fall scaffolding this skill to students as we look at sample prompts, sample essays, and read short stories we will respond to TDA writing prompts for. If students master this style of writing, they will have success in analytical essays they will be expected to write in independent schools.
2) Nonfiction Signposts of Literature: For the remainder of the Fall semester, I will teach students Nonfiction Signposts. These signposts are things to look for in nonfiction/information text, a type of text students need to become as familiar with as possible considering it will be the most common type of text they will be required to interact with across all courses in their education. They will be taught a new signpost each week that we will look for in a different information text to practice. At the end of the semester, we will look at one text where they can use all signposts for as a summative assessment for the semester.
Please feel free to contact me with questions at:
fameacademy.literacy@famefund.org
Wednesday, July 25, 2018
Important information for 7/25 and 7/26
7/25:
ALL Students will be presenting monologues to myself and Mrs. Green this morning between 8:40-11:40am. While they do this, we are grading their content and figuring out which questions we will be putting on the parent scavenger hunt. They will have to find a time to come to us within the time frame.
STUDENTS ARE EXPECTED TO MEMORIZE THEIR MONOLOGUE.
7/26:
In the morning students will be given their place to stand for the exhibit in the library. We will also give them a run down of how Friday will work in terms of getting dressed and what happens before and after the event.
ALL Students will be presenting monologues to myself and Mrs. Green this morning between 8:40-11:40am. While they do this, we are grading their content and figuring out which questions we will be putting on the parent scavenger hunt. They will have to find a time to come to us within the time frame.
STUDENTS ARE EXPECTED TO MEMORIZE THEIR MONOLOGUE.
7/26:
In the morning students will be given their place to stand for the exhibit in the library. We will also give them a run down of how Friday will work in terms of getting dressed and what happens before and after the event.
Tuesday, July 24, 2018
Overview from 7/24 and Assignment due 7/25
Today we worked on our monologues in our Critical Literacy and History classes. The goal is for students to have their monologues finish by the end of study hours tonight (where myself and Mrs. Green will be to help them) so that they can present their monologues tomorrow. Students will be given a note card to write their monologue on when their monologue has been approved. The monologue should be written on the note card to help with tomorrow's presentation and help with memorization.
Below are questions we came up with that students are encouraged to answer in their monologue to help with their content:
If you are doing a book character:
If you are doing a historical figure:
Below are questions we came up with that students are encouraged to answer in their monologue to help with their content:
If you are doing a book character:
1.
Title of book
2.
The Author
3.
Time period with brief description
4.
How old is your character?
5.
What does your character teach “us” about
History?
6.
What are two conflicts your character faces?
7.
What would your character think about today’s
society?
8.
What does your character represent in Critical
Theories (in list below)?
9.
What does your character represent in Literary
Devices (in list below)?
10.
What is one word you would use to describe your
character?
Marxist
Critical Race
Feminist
Historicism
Historicism
Psychoanalytical
Point of View
Characterization (Direct and Indirect/STEAL)
Irony
Mood/Tone
Types of Conflict
Plot triangle/exposition, climax, and resolution
Symbolism
Stages of Grief
Theme
ForeshadowingIf you are doing a historical figure:
1.
Name
2.
Birthday and Death Day
3.
Birth Place
4.
Parents
5.
3 Contributions to
society
6.
Time period with
description
7.
What does your person
teach us about history?
8.
What does your person
represent historically?
9.
What are 3 things you
learned from your historical figure through about their time period?
10. In a minimum of 3 lines, tie your character into
a book we read this summer.
Monday, July 23, 2018
Overview from 7/23 and Assignment due 7/24
For tonight, students should continue working on their monologues to make sure information on the history of the time period is present along with mentioning critical theories and literary devices along with the claims being made.
Today we talked about the end of the novel along with the stages of grief:
Stages of grief:
1. Denial
2. Anger
3. Bargaining
4. Depression
5. Acceptance
We also talked about symbolism (when one thing represents another; ex. a heart represents love, a lion represents courage, a cross represents religion, etc.) In our current book, The Rock and the River title had several interpretations of what it represents.
Here is the book that is the companion to The Rock and the River:
This book will not be studied at F.A.M.E. Academy, but students are encouraged to read it if they wish to see the continued story through Maxie's point of view.
Today we talked about the end of the novel along with the stages of grief:
Stages of grief:
1. Denial
2. Anger
3. Bargaining
4. Depression
5. Acceptance
We also talked about symbolism (when one thing represents another; ex. a heart represents love, a lion represents courage, a cross represents religion, etc.) In our current book, The Rock and the River title had several interpretations of what it represents.
Here is the book that is the companion to The Rock and the River:
This book will not be studied at F.A.M.E. Academy, but students are encouraged to read it if they wish to see the continued story through Maxie's point of view.
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